Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live?
Give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.
The food industry has made rapid growth in the past decade. Due to processed food cooking has become a hassle-free task. N<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">owadays, t</span>oo many efforts are not required in the kitchen as frozen chopped vegetables are available in the market. Further to make it even more comfortable and quick, canned beans are there to help you. In the following paragraphs, I will shed some light on my viewpoints on the above statement.
Firstly, it is very common these days that both partners are working which is why it is difficult for a person to give their full-time in the kitchen. Therefore, this revolution of the food industry has definitely helped working couples to manage their kitchen. Next, in this modern technology era where everything has automated the use of ovens, microwaves and hot-pot equipment have brought a drastic change in lifestyle. Their use has changed the cooking style and made cooking more comfortable.
Furthermore, bringing frozen vegetables and canned beans from the supermarket saves your time and money. The time one is spending in the kitchen can be utilized in some personal family time or in your own relaxing time. Lastly, considering all its benefits few of the inevitable drawbacks are also there, those have to be discussed. Packed food is not as much healthier than fresh vegetables but in this busy lifestyle if you are getting chance to prepare the meal at home without putting many efforts, then I would say preference is definitely with homemade food. Because it is a cheaper and reasonably easier option to have.
All things considered, I must say the food industry and technology both in combine has made our life easier in the kitchen. As fas as health is not being compromised it is always better to make use of them and save your efforts. So that in this hectic life you have some time for yourself and your loved ones.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...vegetables are available in the market. Further to make it even more comfortable and qu...
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Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to work' or 'work'.
Suggestion: to work; work
...the food industry has definitely helped working couples to manage their kitchen. Next, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.975 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9608843168 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590625 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.979784598 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6470588235 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8235294118 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.17647058824 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194886798115 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574148430014 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037724314701 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113635869262 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452872908594 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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