Nowadays international tourism is the biggest industry worldwide. Unfortunately, sometimes it creates tension between people from different cultures, instead of better understanding. Why do you think it is happening and how can it be improved?
Although the tourism industry has become the central part of the economy worldwide, there are cases that it raises tensions and difficulties among different nationalities and groups. This essay believes that there are two main factors that contribute to this challenge, while there are viable solutions to tackle this issue.
The main sources of conflicts, which are raised due to international tourism, are both tourists and hosts. On the one hand, some travelers do no obey the local rules and instructions of a place. For instance, Muslim countries have strict rules regarding alcohol and hijab, and by not following these instructions, tourists might get into trouble, leading to tensions between countries in order to release the traveler. On the other hand, local corrupted groups use tourists to follow their own political, social or religious agendas. There are examples in the Middle East or Africa, in which local gangs arrest western travelers in order to negotiate their requests from international authorities. These problems have a tremendous impact on local and international tourism in recent years.
However, authorities could still be effective in order to decrease these tensions by taking different initiatives. Firstly, there should be more awareness programs for international tourists in order to make them aware of the local rules. Travelers would take benefit from following these rules since, not only there would be fewer problems with locals, but also, they would enjoy their journey by experiencing the life of local people. Secondly, countries, who host tourists, should take more responsibility in protecting travelers. If they allocate more money and resources to enhance the security of these trips, more tourists would travel there, leading to the development of local businesses.
In conclusion, there are different factors contributing to growing tensions, which originated from international tourism, while two main solutions are provided to solve these challenges.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60655737705 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87513130228 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570491803279 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2338001789 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.142857143 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127159012679 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470436186786 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402910589512 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0823034339215 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0133817010898 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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