Nowadays many people choose ready-made food and refuse to cook at home. Why do you think it happens? what are the advantages and disadvantages of such a choice?
In recent times, it is believed that a large variety of people opt processed food instead of preparing a meal at their house. This following essay aimed to examine the major reasons for this phenomenon and present my opinion on whether this selection is negative.
On the one hand, there are a number of enormous benefits from the prepared dishes that human beings can reap. Firstly, eating this kind of food, individuals, especially adolescents would have the chance to not only enjoy the cuisines from around the world and broaden their horizons but also immerse themselves in new experiences they have never had before. A typical example is that they could know what it feels like to have meals from Korea, put on the traditional customs of this nation and live in the cultural space. Another positive change would be fast-food helps people to save time and brings thousands of jobs for employees serving in this industry.
On the other hand, despite its benefits, I believe that the drawbacks of this product should also not be forgotten. To begin with, processed food is the key contributing factor behind obesity due to it contains the amount of fat, which means the majority of people must be allocated their budget to treat cause of this disease. Not to mention that making the use of prepared food is the source of forming the sedentary lifestyle of children. Last but not least, eating outside more than cooking at home maybe widen the distance between youngsters and their parents due to family meals are an opportunity for face-to-face stories among family members in order to tighten such relationships.
In conclusion, it seems to me that ready-made food generates demerits than its optimistic. Hence, the government should enact policies to warn people about the drawbacks of this type of food as well as reduce the price of foodstuffs to encourage people making meals at their house.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, so, well, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.965625 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55645437753 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60625 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.0983978214 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.416666667 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126580173108 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468509977836 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386512576816 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0834375633845 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03841593685 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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