Nowadays, most large companies operate multi-nationally. To what extent those companies should have a responsibility towards local communities in which they operate?
Growing number of international firms have started businesses around the globe in the current era. These companies are evidently generating an enormous amount of revenue, however, their contribution towards native people is also significant.
Owing to ease in business rules and regulations, a vast majority of renowned companies have started their operations throughout the world, especially in developing countries where labor is relatively cheap. On the one hand, these corporations are fueling economy by bringing mammoth foreign exchange in these countries, on the other hand, money they pay in terms of tax also has a positive impact on lives of indigenous groups.
Nevertheless, I believe these firms have an additional role to play and it is their duty to serve society in which they run businesses. Firstly, multi-national companies can allocate the specific amount of seats or job quota for local people so that it could provide them a chance to work in reputable corporations. Furthermore, benefits which they offer could result in enhancing the life style of local communities. In addition to that, education centers can be established to teach unfortunate members of society so that they can serve their country in a much better way. Moreover, enterprises can also apportion a certain amount of funds for the health sector. For instance, Microsoft’s fully funded ‘Eradicate Polio’ program has attributed towards eliminating Polio throughout South East Asia within ten years. Similarly, international companies can help in curtailing diseases which are harmful and life threatening.
To recapitulate, governments can take various advantages from organizations operating in their countries in terms of taxes and shares. Having said that, these companies also have a responsibility to provide folks with aid in job, education and health sector.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, similarly, so, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62323943662 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17530478913 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62323943662 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.676651653 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.846153846 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200591117189 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681679958395 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04405057115 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118147774839 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259217154507 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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