People are more likely shopping in big supermarkets rather that community stores close to them. I am unsure how the above trend happened and it is advantages or disadvantages, and will, therefore, examine that in this essay and share my personal examples and give an opinion.
It is hard for local stores to satisfied people’s high demand in a fast-paced society. In this explosion contemporary society, people received a variety of information to influence them such as promotion news or message of a supermarket, not only the price but also the everyday event. For instance, the cashier gave me a card after I check out in a supermarket. I could collect points online use the promotion code on that card. Once you fill the online form, you will have a chance to win a brand new car. The local shop cannot afford this type of promotion without any financial support as if the supermarket. Another significant argument in favor is the supermarkets build in huge shopping mall normally. It will provide a wide range of facilities for family or individuals. People are enjoying and relax to shop there.
I tend to agree this is a disadvantage because it is no benefits for our community and people. If people were going to large supermarkets frequently, it would be no chance for local shops to survive. People could use less time to socialize in the community. Furthermore, drive incredibly far to purchase products is the only choice for us. For example, I did not have enough salt to cook my dinner so I have to drive around half an hour to get that from supermarkets.
To sum up, it is hard for a local shop to survive nowadays but people still need the local shop for a justification.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89630094556 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591216216216 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7709090815 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7058823529 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4117647059 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25826194217 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774252418335 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598893218252 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160824883356 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319851169955 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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