In recent years, media focus on negative circumstances and emergencies more than positive effects and developments. Due to some people thoughts it is harmful to people and also to community. In my opinion this situation has a plethora of disadvantages than advantages.
First of all media affect many people directly. Nowadays, majority of people have though job conditions nad very less free time. In their free time after work they watch TV that is main Hobby. If they watch negative news and reports on TV lots of people would be effected badly and feel unhappy. For example, if i negatively effected from media programmes in the evening, i could have negative feelings and be nervous.
Secondally, the community would be effected from the negative news and reports that media focus more than positive ones. Because a lot of media companies have daily rating concerns, they make bad economic news on TV. For example in my country tv programmes focus mainly on nagetice family relations which would have very good rating scores. The people watch mainly this type of shows than an educational nad scientific programmes.
Finally, regarding to very negative impacts on human psychology and health the media companies should focus on programmes that ar educational and positive more than negative ones and emergencies. Althoug this type of programmes are watched from majority of people and have good rating scores, these effected also whole community. A lot of people would loose their self confident if they watch to much this type of TV shows.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, regarding, second, so, for example, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13779527559 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66323669351 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515748031496 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3966406628 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170809818463 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070226712977 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548216872715 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131411530307 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596644716033 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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