Nowadays the use of social media such as Facebook, Twitter and so on is becoming more popular than one-on-one conversations in person. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience.
As electronic devices play increasingly more central role in our lives, it has been suggested that there has been an unprecedented decline in interpersonal communications not only with colleagues, business associates, and close friends but also with immediate family members. I completely agree with this assertion, moreover, this is a worrying trend that set to continue.
Even though face-to-face interactions are possibly at their lowest level, it would be foolish not to recognize the valuable role that social media plays. Thanks to it we can get in touch with anyone, at the touch of the button, regardless of the time-zone and location. For example, we can follow what our friends have been doing by social media platform such as Facebook, Instagram, and Twitter, therefore, the rise in communications through such methods cannot be underestimated.
Nevertheless, this reduces contact in person-to-person communications is a disturbing inevitable by-product of the social media environment and could attribute to change in lifestyle, for the current generation. For example, the previous generation has no such medium to interact with others, so they worked in nine-to-five jobs, went home and spend some quality time with their family. This millennial in stark contrast, are frequently employed in digital nomads, surfing through social sites and squandering valuable time which leads to a different way of lifestyle on par with our ancestors.
Despite communications is at its highest level in terms of quantity, the quality of it is completely debatable. Social media notifications should not replace face-to-face communications. senior family members should restrict their children to not to use electronic gadgets at least on the dinner table so that they can spend time in chatting with them, and it should also the duty of parents to set a good example to children by not using them at the same time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Senior
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, at least, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39202657807 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16892673718 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58803986711 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.0493179124 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.545454545 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3636363636 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121677509137 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468386985113 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373092581397 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0719248895708 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234500941029 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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