One long distance flight consumes fuel which a car uses in several years’ time, but they cause the same amount of pollution. So some people think that we should discourage non-essential flights such as tourist travel, rather than to limit the use of cars. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Growing air pollution is one of the burning global warming issues. Air pollution mostly caused by cars and airliners. Some people equate the one flight fuel consumption is same as the car air pollution during the year. Therefore, it is believed that it is better to avoid flights whenever it deems fit than to limit car usage. I am not supporting this notion as it is not achievable until and unless all the people develop similar mindset. Another reason is tourism industry has became more profitable because of comfortable and timely transportation option which is air travel.
Even if, the fact is that airplane depletes exact amount of fuel and produce same number of air pollution as car in a year, it is not possible to discourage non-essential flight. In order to achieve success in this manner all the people should cultivate same mindset which is nearly impossible. It is duty of airliner company that even it has few customers for particular flight then also they have to provide same services, no matter flight is full or partly empty. In this case, air pollution is as same as having all the customers on-board. For example, Jet Airways is bound to take-off flights even though they have couple of customers which dictates that it is not possible to reduce air pollution until all the ethnic groups having the same mindset to discourage non-essential flights. Last but not least, for some it might be the non-essential flight, but for some it might be very much essential due to some emergency reasons.
On the other side, as tourism industry flourishes it not a practical approach to opt for other transportation options. In fact, flights is the only fastest and comfortable option nowadays to move from the one corner to other corner of the world. Through air services one can avail themselves within day, no matter how far the destined place is. For example, country like Russia and China, flight is very much affordable, comfortable and less time consuming transportation option. Additionally, car might not endure some countries’ whether conditions as there are some rocky, desert and forest areas whereas flight is the only right choice. The aforementioned countries have bad whether and some geographical area where road or train transport is not available.
To conclude, as flight is undisputed traveling option for large population of the world. It is irrefutable that though, it produces the same amount of pollution during one flight as car does in whole year, it is one and the only option as off now to reach somewhere comfortably and in a timely manner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, therefore, whereas, as to, for example, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2160.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 434.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97695852535 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77699767952 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502304147465 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 676.8 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.996037067 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319046224889 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991919484855 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740157020319 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200118475619 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047798278666 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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