Ordinary people try to copy famous personalities by seeing them on TV and reading them on newspaper .
What is the reason?
Is it good idea to copy famous personalities?
Today’s, the individuals have tendency to follow affluent professional persons which belong to such sports, artist, vocal and drama theatre professions. People come to know about such favourite starts by watching them on TV programs and reading journals articles. However, the name and fame, popularity and luxurious life style fetch attraction of individuals. This essay will discuss the reason why people copy famous persons and also disclose the why it is not positive factor to inherit famous celebrities.
To begin with, there are plethoras of reason why people want to copy famous persons. Firstly, the name and fame of such personalities leads the trend to follow their efforts and prospective towards achieving goal. Secondly, the luxurious life style and adequate financial backups of famous individuals also influence people. For instance in INDIA, where the people especially youngsters have enthusiasm to copy persons from sports and film industries. Apparently, they follow them as their role models and try to want become like them. Finally, the newsletters and TV broadcasting houses give crucial response to famous actors and sportsmen, thus the advertisement and popularity of celebrities hold common believe of peoples,
On the other hand, due to cosmetic surgery, the film stars gain their presences and popularity. But the ordinary people cannot efforts such expensive aspects. Therefore, this is not good practice to follow favourite persons. Moreover, some cosmetic surgery spurs the health ailments as well. A part from that, if the smoking and alcoholic drinking scene are being broadcasting while performing in film by actor then it might be intensified bad habits among audience. So it is imperative to follow only positive aspects of famous personalities. Lastly, some celebrities do advertisement of prohibited products such as cigarettes and wines. Hence, a person who follows such celebrities will purchase these products although these have health consequences.
To sum up, due to rich life style and reputation of popular persons in the country, attracts common people to copying them. However, some bad approaches such as smoking and drinking of affluent personalities may affect on social and health. In my view, individuals should acquire only positive views from famous celebrities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1977.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55337078652 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88489983836 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575842696629 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.6818880479 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.85 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.35 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32304019692 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867087238308 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077546367108 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210781272396 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0867883288985 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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