Over consuming sugar is unhealthy. Some people think that government should take responsibility to control it. Others think that individual should take responsibility of sugar intake. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Since bygone days, sugar has been favorite of many. It has been known over centuries that over consumption of sugar is injurious to health. Although many consider governing body as responsible authority to limit the sugar usage in country, I believe each person should understand his limit on sugar consumption.
The administrative department can take strict actions in betterment of its citizens by increasing the price on sugary items. As few would think this to have cut in purchase and people would compel to opt for healthier options but this would deter only the lower class to refrain from sugary stuffs. The higher and middle class would still continue buying to satisfy their taste bud. Secondly, a section of society believes running government campaign to showcase the repercussions of sweet items such as chocolates, cakes, pastries and sweets should help; but, people consuming sweets actually are aware of its health hazards still consume it for taste. Therefore, government steps do not help much to stop the population from abstaining sugars in their daily consumption.
The main reason I believe the sugar control can be done at personal level is due to the fact that self-discipline and control plays a major role in forming any habit. If a person decides himself to abandon the unhealthiest foodstuffs then no other help is required to switch him to healthier meals. Thus, self-determination has power to have control on sugar control; thereby, if every person thinks for his sugar consumption then entire country can be healthier and happier. For example, although the sweets and chocolates are sold in shops, if a person is not tempted to eat it than definitely he will not buy.
To sum up, I pen down saying that despite government efforts to control sugar usage by imposing tax and levies on sugar sales or running the awareness campaign, it will not help the person if he is not determined to stop on over consumption of sugar. Thus, the self-control is the best way to check sugar intake on daily basis.
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Suggestion:
...he unhealthiest foodstuffs then no other help is required to switch him to health...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, thus, for example, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01176470588 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76183204829 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579411764706 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7784954585 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.714285714 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266135008385 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817031918208 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531052504831 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157180467301 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361459768971 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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