Parents are busy nowadays and they are not able to give time to their children. So they are becoming indisciplined and careless. What do you think are the main factors behind this? What remedial actions can be taken by the parents?
it is often believed that parents remain busy and do not have sufficient time to spend with their children, which affects adversely on the overall development of their offsprings. I agree with this statement and think monotonous life to be the prime cause behind the situation. I also believe that progenitors can improve this condition by sparing some time for their young ones.
To begin with, the most compelling reason for a child's improper behavior and carelessness is due to parents monotonous lifestyle. In most of the families, both the parents are working and they do not get any time for their kids. Apparently, the kids are raised in day care facilities, where they hardly learn about morals and ethics. As a consequence, the child is not molded properly by learning manners and discipline, which is an indespensable asset of life. For instance, my friend's son shows less emotional bonding with the family because he was kept in boarding school since his early childhood. Thus, the main reason for the child's improper behavior and mannerism is due to parents over involvement in the business or office work and leaving the child away in daycare or boarding schools.
Another reason that keeps parents away from taking care of kids is their involvement in social circles. many parents are seen busy on social media sites and enjoying parties, leaving their youngones in their condition. The young children feel deprive of love and see their parents busy in their parties and celebrations. consequently, it sets a negative picture in the mind of a child and affects his behavior.
However, just like every problem, this can also be resolved. The working parents should daily spare time for their kids and must ask them about their daily tasks such as homework. In addition, at least one meal of the day should be together with the whole family so the child feels love and care of the progenitors. Moreover, it is observed that many parents remain busy on watsaap and facebook instead of caring for their offsprings, which should not be a case. In all the cases, whether parents are working or not, the child should be given time and he should be felt loved. In this way, the child would grow perfectly and would show no discipline problems.
In conclusion, I pen down saying that every child is an important and he should be loved and cared for by the parents. As a result, every parent should spare enough time with the child to see him molded in the desired way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, thus, at least, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2068.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 426.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8544600939 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52528922606 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511737089202 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.0 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7841060051 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4761904762 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2380952381 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253287035275 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826886066074 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556586986647 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149329621147 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525087377251 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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