Health is wealth. Nowadays people have very keen interest to maintain their health but sometime it cross the limit. By knowingly or unknowingly individuals specially the youngsters are become addicted to the drugs no matter it is bad or good. Some people think that due to the society this tread is increasing. In this essay, I will highlight the reasons behind this and try to provide some solutions to curb this situation.
There are multifarious reasons behind the drug addiction. First and foremost, individuals need quick results. To be precise, now a days people do not have the time to wait for something good. They want everything just now. For instance, every teenager wants to have a good body and for this they are taking steroids into their bloods which leads to many health hassles. They are influenced by the so called bodybuilders and think that only a drug can make the immediate change. Additionally, as people are struggling with there work-life balance and having a busy schedule, they do not want to miss anything although they may have some physical pains. In order to avoid the pain they are taking painkillers, which is a good durg but individuals tend to take it whenever they feel something wrong. For example, during winter many people suffer from dental problems and they use medicines to solve this issue. Youngsters observe their parents to take this medicines and follow their footsteps whenever it is needed. Thus, society as well as the parents are responsible for increasing the drug habits in the young minds.
However, we can ameliorate this with some stringent guidelines. Firstly, government should impose a ban on illegal drugs which are easily imported from different nations. Even though, this is a million dollar business, elected officials should take a bold step in order to prevent the addiction habits among young adults. If these steroids are not available in the local market, due to high prize people especially the youngsters may eliminate the consumption of these drugs. Secondly, from the individual level we can mitigate this problem. Despite of the quick relief from some sort of physical pain after taking painkillers, we should use them moderately so that young people can understand the consumption rate. Instead of taking medicines now and then, individuals should be more patient and give their body the time for recovery. Moreover, they should educate their children about these drugs. Hence, we can destroy the habits of good or bad drugs from young adults minds.
To conclude, I would like to reiterate my opinion by saying that, although due to busy lives we cannot wait for a long nowadays, if we understand the side effects and educate the same to our children, the use of durgs will be reduced form young people's lives. We need a collaboration between governments and individuals in order to ameliorate this situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, for example, for instance, sort of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2416.0 1615.20841683 150% => OK
No of words: 479.0 315.596192385 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04384133612 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63146914504 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505219206681 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 738.0 506.74238477 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.1093728313 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4814814815 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7407407407 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25925925926 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0969375394699 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0294453363471 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352021047137 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0599204211464 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214260454671 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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