People in all modern societies use drugs, but today’s youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example.
Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.
You should write at least 250 words.
You should spend about 40minutes on this task.
Modern societies have started consumption of drugs as a normal practice in parties as a status symbol. it is influencing today's youth to experiment with drugs in terms of both legal and illegal at an early age. some sociologists have analyzed this situation and came up with the report that parents and other members of higher society have set a bad standard for these youngsters.
I think that the pressure of proving your standard in the society to gain respect and admiration has kind of started this problem of consumption of substance abuse like cocaine, hash and weed just to name a few. As we all are part of it we can't deny that adults who feel the burden kind of use these substances to feel relax and use them as a stress buster. they take this in moderation.
But this thing has made a negative impact on the minds of their children who see their parents or guardians involved in consumption of these things as a part of their daily routine. even in social media and movies they see the protagonist smoking weed in case of being depressed or thinking it as a fun thing to do amongst friends. influencing the younger minds to use drugs either synthetic like cough syrups, pills or medical prescribed like morphine.
As today's youth is kind of smart they find different kinds of things to pleasure themselves for their own needs. Decoding the fact that some of these drugs are easily available in the market. Regular consumption of drugs has started to show its effect on this budding generation as some are becoming impotent, some are getting fitz and even their lifes have just become a play thing for them and in way to look cool they are on the verge of their death-bed.
I feel our young generation should be saved from these clutches. First of all parents should be more responsible for what actions are they displaying in front of their child, secondly they should keep a check on their child's health and daily practices if he/she is under any kind of a bad influence or might be brainwashed by an anti-social elements. Lastly, they should be educated about the effects of these so-called fun elements and educated properly about this in school.
In conclusion, drugs are bad and everyone should avoid this habit, parents should take care of their lad as they are the future which is going to take us ahead and not the pillars that are weakly standing on some stupid bad practice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, lastly, look, second, secondly, so, as to, i feel, i think, in conclusion, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 24.0651302605 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1987.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 425.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67529411765 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47398757735 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512941176471 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.6302455385 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.1875 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5625 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226494980443 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813609519815 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110046703022 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128077534059 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145026012119 0.056905535591 255% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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