In today's world, an increasing number of people who have sedentary lifestyle have risen dramaticly. The number of people who suffers from obesity, heart disease and hypertension has become more due to this trend in recent times. This essay will look at causes of it and suggest some measures which might address it.
First of all, nowadays people have less active lifestyle because of two primary reasons. To begin with, technological developments have altered the way people live completely. Machines do innumerable jobs which were performed by manforce before. For example, while poeple in earlier times travelled on horse, automobiles are widely used nowadays consequently people spend less energy. Electronical appliances such as washing machines and dish washers which are cutting edge of computer technology also do majority of houseworks within twenty minutes hense they are not needed to done by human. Further and more importantly, jobs in the market have altered completely. The majority of people were farmers fifty years ago while many people are working as engineers and consultants at offices at the moment given the fact that today's jobs requires sitting on chairs long hours and completing tasks using computers rather than working on site.
Secondly, countless steps can be taken to persuade individuals to stay fit. Many sports can be a part of curriculum that will be an effective way to motivate children be active during day. Goverments can also motivate public schools to have sport teams such as volleyball, soccer and basketball by organising national competitions. Moreover, Local councils and organisations can organise events to increase awareness of detrimental consequences of sedentary lifestyle. Patients will share experiences which will be an eye opening example for many. For instance, a study by Goverment of Jan in 2018 reported that 80% of workers began attending swimming courses frequently after an informative programme was broadcasted on CNN television channel.
By way of conclusion, having a sedentary lifestyle has become very common because of technological developments and changes in job features. Countless events can be organised to motivate people do sports but individuals must be aware of consequences and do sports everyday.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 265, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... be aware of consequences and do sports everyday.
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Line 7, column 275, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of consequences and do sports everyday.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1934.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47875354108 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90607101394 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617563739377 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6573186734 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.444444444 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6111111111 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226370780216 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644181813933 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495853302232 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122151158856 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037844527758 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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