People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?
It is a trend these days that many people prefer attending educational institutes for higher studies for pursuing varied reasons. Technology is changing at an alarming rate. In that light, it has become pertinent for many to up-skill their knowledge and technical expertise. To discuss this further, I have elaborated my views in following paragraphs.
Firstly, the formal education taught in past generation was too academic and non-practical in nature. Jobs of today didn’t evolve when we were studying. With advent of super technologies like Artificial Intelligence, Bitcoin, block chain and so on and so forth, it is clear, for people who want to survive the demanding and ever-changing job to learn new skills. Educational Institution provides you a structured and syllabus based learning. This enables a candidate to focus his energy in step by step approach. Furthermore, each employer recognises skills achieved or learned via an academic accolade. So a candidate from credible institutes gets preference over others.
Secondly, colleges enable meeting new people from different walks of life and cultures. For example, many mid managerial staff go back to school. They have learnt certain skill and need to brush up certain skills and, hone fresh perspective to same age-old problems. Further, it provides a good platform to form long-lasting network of associates, with whom you could align your common goals in life. Colleges provides you group learning and, helps you assess where do you stand in terms of knowledge and helps, you to put extra effort to learn that task.
In all, my take on the subject on hand is that people, who get an opportunity to attend colleges get avenues to be polish their aptitude and make lifelong friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23404255319 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84472319883 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68085106383 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9835407463 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8235294118 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5882352941 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29411764706 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234354519922 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059559148453 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723413951637 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129993644149 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064364476365 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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