People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a
new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days, starting life afresh abroad can be a serious challenge. Many contend that newcomers should abide by the cultural ethics and customs of their new foreign land. I completely agree with this statement and in this essay, I am going to discuss some of the benefits that people might receive while following the new country’s rules and traditions.
Firstly, following the local tradition of the host country helps new-comers an acceptance in the society. This can be seen as an advantage as local people start acknowledging them and this might lead to social bonding. For instance, if a person residing in a gulf country and celebrates their local traditions such as Eid and Ramadan with the locals; that person will develop a healthy relation in his/her new society as people will start interacting with the person more often. On the other hand, if a person shows reluctance in participating and following such tradition; people might perceive him as reclusive.
Secondly, opportunities to learn new cutoms will ensure them smooth adaptability in new country. For many, engaging in learning the new rules and regulations of the country allows them to expose with new prosperities of living standard. This ought to be taken in a positive way. One example of it can be following obligatory rules of driving can be challenging but as a person learn those new rules, he can be assure that he has been adapted to one new customs of that country.
To conclude, moving to a new country to start a new life can be achievable by taking part in local traditional values and customs as it help them to have greater acceptance and adaptability by the new host country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.925795053 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77843244445 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512367491166 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5243289728 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.166666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274149402506 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103294375347 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507414374243 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178925453726 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367031602311 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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