People sleep less than before in many countries. Why people sleep less? What effect does it have individually and in society?
In this modern world, the lifestyles of people all over the world have been altered drastically. One of the several changes, which is giving rise to many serious concerns is the reduction in the amount of sleep that people take. While, there are several reasons accountable for this, its effects are profoundly detrimental on both, the society and the individuals.
To begin with, one of the major aspects that force people to compromise with their sleep is the pressure to perform better and to win the competition over others. This is true for all those individuals who want to prove their excellence in their particular academic domains and also for those who want to over-take other fellow workers at their respective workplaces and grab the opportunity to make progress. This phenomenon is ubiquitous because the level of competition in every field has crossed beyond a certain acceptable level and to survive that many have to compromise with the time, when they are supposed to take rest.
Apart from these reasons which are success-oriented, there are other reasons also which actually waste the time of individuals. With the advent of technology, smartphones have reached in the pockets of individuals, belonging to any socio-economic background. There are many activities that can be performed on this gadget with an excuse that they are stress-busting. Playing games online, watching live-streaming videos, reading books etcetera, can be named as a few instances. People are usually busy throughout the day-time and the best time they find to do these things is the night-time after taking dinner. They usually get driven by this and waste a great deal of their precious time which they could utilize to tranquilize their minds.
Moving further, undoubtedly this phenomenon is affecting individuals very negatively. By sleeping-less, body and mind does not get adequate rest and the individuals in such a condition become very irritable. It reduces the activeness of an individual who feels sluggish and sleepy during the day-time. It has also disturbed the circadian rhythm of many individuals, and people, suffering from sleeplessness and increasing in number. Moreover, the places in the society which should be lively in the early hours of the day, like parks and stadiums, are visited by only a handful of people because most of them fail to wake up early to cherish the fresh moments of the day.
To conclude, it can be said, without any denial, that although there are several factors stealing the sleep away from individuals, who have succumbed either to the desire to succeed or to get entertained, those who are doing these, get badly impacted. Therefore, people should take sound sleep to ensure their wellbeing.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 412, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: increasing
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2304.0 1615.20841683 143% => OK
No of words: 445.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17752808989 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86655969752 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539325842697 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 719.1 506.74238477 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8378091613 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.263157895 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4210526316 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36842105263 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199544675 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622024829347 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578933491217 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120847873559 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561834160543 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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