people sleep less than before in many countries. why people sleep less? what effect does it have individually and in society?
It is an irrefutable fact that the amount of rest plays a vital role in everyone's sphere. Sleep will not only help to concentrate more on work but also rejuvenate body. Compared to past, in most of the countries it has been observed that the people are sleeping very less. This phenomenon has some reasons and some effects. This essay will discuss both of them.
One of the most causative factors for this circumstance is, to earn money. Many people are actually after the concept of "Time is Money" and earning most of them in extra paid jobs. As they can fulfill their need with this benefits of the over time jobs, people are taking the time from sleep and replacing with work. Another point worth considering is, for the people who are under poverty line, this is the only way to get paid well. It has been said that Most of the loco pilot drivers of Indian railways are getting more than 100% the salary as an overtime benefits. These are the ultra prominent reasons, that people are sleeping less than past in many parts of world.
When it comes to effects, this happening has some drastic consequences. Sleepless nights will not only make people feeble but also less healthy. We all know that, a person need at least 7-8 hours of sleep to be healthy and if you are working in a field where you have a lot of stress this time will vary. Moreover, this scenario will affect the metabolism of the body. Sleeping less will have some negative impact in personal life also. As the individual will be frustrated with less sleep, he or she will be less interactive with other people, they want to be alienated from others. Furthermore, they will be socially inactive in the community.
All things consider, sleeping less is one of the consequences of doing more work to have more money. Although, people will financially benefit, they will lose health which is imperative, this circumstance will have a negative impact on society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73020527859 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43758350952 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1656260004 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.65 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.05 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264850230858 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857432175586 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922246015211 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172794432844 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225702744878 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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