Politicians are more responsible for protection of the environment than individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Environmental protection has become the first priority for the human race to survive on this planet. Some believe that it is the responsibility of an individual to save the mother earth. However, I opine that government’s authority is the must for environment security.
I accede that contribution of a layman is necessary as the government cannot control what they would do in their home or garden. It is required for the people to understand the consequences of the danger they can cause to nature. They should think before they purchase any product. For example, if they want to purchase a refrigerator or air conditioner, they would consider cooling gasses being used, as these gasses play a primary role in the greenhouse effect. Similarly, they should travel moderately to reduce the air pollution. Thus, mankind should consider protection of the habitat on the earth as a moral duty.
However, the ministry can remind this moral duty of the human being in case they forget by enforcing stringent environment-friendly policies. They can not only ban the products which are not eco-friendly but also can increase the tax on traveling to reduce the air pollution. Also, they can keep a close eye on factories to prevent them from polluting river, air or land. For instance, they could pass the bill for an inspection of a workshop before providing a licensee to ensure it does not cause any harmful impact on the surroundings. Thus, the authority is required more than willingness or morality of a person.
In conclusion, I believe that of course, it is virtuous for an individual to protect the environment, although politicians are more responsible for saving the planet because they have the power to enforce rules and regulations on the citizens
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'similarly', 'so', 'thus', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'of course']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.222222222222 0.247107183377 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.16975308642 0.155533422707 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0493827160494 0.0946595960268 52% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0462962962963 0.0501214627716 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0648148148148 0.0437548338989 148% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.123456790123 0.122226691241 101% => OK
Participles: 0.037037037037 0.0403226058552 92% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.08285155931 2.80594681477 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.033950617284 0.0326793684256 104% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.132716049383 0.0861772015684 154% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0401234567901 0.021408717616 187% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.00617283950617 0.011925033212 52% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1768.0 1933.35771543 91% => OK
No of words: 291.0 316.048096192 92% => OK
Chars per words: 6.07560137457 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.360824742268 0.374742101984 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.274914089347 0.28420135186 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.209621993127 0.203846283523 103% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.14089347079 0.137316102897 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08285155931 2.80594681477 110% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.037074148 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563573883162 0.56093040696 100% => OK
Word variations: 58.9184668426 60.7387585426 97% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.4 20.7743622355 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8264955395 49.517814964 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.866666667 127.492653851 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7743622355 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 0.814263465372 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 46.8914089347 49.1944974215 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.36263736264 1.69124875643 81% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320609110371 0.332605444948 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.114772204121 0.102741220458 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0471735747585 0.0668466124924 71% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.554878678959 0.534860350844 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.155146154726 0.148594505496 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131172996035 0.134430193775 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665398872184 0.0742795772207 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.40833996458 0.324371583561 126% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0598895139089 0.0638462369009 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233360931235 0.228012699653 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372552189763 0.058150111329 64% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.