Popular events like football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[3]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...ople together. It teaches people how to loose with grace and how to win with modesty....
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Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...h other in positive harmless manner. On this platforms countries can display skills ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 372, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: What
...nt countries to compete internationally.What to add more, when people from different...
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Discourse Markers used:
['furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'kind of', 'in my view']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.278571428571 0.247107183377 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.15 0.155533422707 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0857142857143 0.0946595960268 91% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0285714285714 0.0501214627716 57% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0428571428571 0.0437548338989 98% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121428571429 0.122226691241 99% => OK
Participles: 0.025 0.0403226058552 62% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.93014969345 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0392857142857 0.0326793684256 120% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0714285714286 0.0861772015684 83% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0214285714286 0.021408717616 100% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0321428571429 0.011925033212 270% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1639.0 1933.35771543 85% => OK
No of words: 257.0 316.048096192 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.37743190661 6.12580529183 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.396887159533 0.374742101984 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.315175097276 0.28420135186 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.241245136187 0.203846283523 118% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.151750972763 0.137316102897 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93014969345 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.037074148 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607003891051 0.56093040696 108% => OK
Word variations: 64.4154105732 60.7387585426 106% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 19.7692307692 20.7743622355 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.9717235731 49.517814964 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.076923077 127.492653851 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7743622355 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.384615384615 0.814263465372 47% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 51.2867404969 49.1944974215 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.91935483871 1.69124875643 113% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3535152597 0.332605444948 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.097995961177 0.102741220458 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0474168368401 0.0668466124924 71% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.504188447389 0.534860350844 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.128861997232 0.148594505496 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144370390905 0.134430193775 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118844693244 0.0742795772207 160% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.267174816802 0.324371583561 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0562820650055 0.0638462369009 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244262920209 0.228012699653 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115158475874 0.058150111329 198% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Hi reader,

As per IELTS guideline , we have to write 250 words in essay writing. In this essay I have followed the instruction where e-graders has mentioned to add more content. Kindly guide on this. Also, give guidelines if I need to add more discourse in mentioned essay.

More suggestions for improvement will be appreciated.

Thanks and regards

Bhumika

Sports event provide a platform
Sport events provide a platform

Sentence: On this platforms countries can display skills and strength possessed by their youth which is the true treasure of any country.,
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to this and platforms

flaws:
No. of Words: 258 350 // More content wanted. Need one more paragraph.

Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 258 350
No. of Characters: 1346 1500
No. of Different Words: 160 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.008 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.217 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.797 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 99 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 78 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 60 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 35 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.846 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.403 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.154 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.313 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.558 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.056 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5