Present a written argument to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:
Safety standards are important when building people's homes. Who should be responsible for enforcing strict building codes – the government or the people who build the homes?
Use your own knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Safety procedures are very essential for the construction of residential building. In my opinion, the government is the one who is approving the plans and designs of the house. So they are fully responsible for the safety measures for the real estate.
Firstly, the residential buildings need pre approval from the ruling party to initiate the construction. The person is submitting all the required documents for plan and location to the municipality are used to visit the place to check any controversy with the residential building standard or any violation with the ruler and regulation of constructing houses. After that, the government provides sanction to proceed the construction. This is the methodology going in my hometown. So from this, the government is fully answerable for all causes would happen, not the civilians.
Secondly, the civilians who are constructing the apartment are responsible only for the materials which uses for the building and the interior architecture. In developed countries, the corporation have their own safety procedures and construction codes to build the residential buildings. For example, on October 1989, the resident in Newyork build a house in his/her registered land. He got admitted all the documents needed for the construction including safety precaution. But unfortunately, the building was collapsed after two years. Because the soil in that particular location was not suitable to withstand the building mass and the foundation was not grasped with the base of the apartment. This case was taken to the government for justice. After the investigation, the government announced that the officer who did not do follow the safety rules for that apartment. The government took over the responsibility and paid all money to the resident.
In the conclusion, the corporation or municipality are the main concern to implement the standards and safety rules to the residents who are constructing the homes, not the civilians.
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'for example', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.276470588235 0.247107183377 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.147058823529 0.155533422707 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.05 0.0946595960268 53% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0382352941176 0.0501214627716 76% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0147058823529 0.0437548338989 34% => OK
Prepositions: 0.102941176471 0.122226691241 84% => OK
Participles: 0.0411764705882 0.0403226058552 102% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.15956401335 2.80594681477 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0323529411765 0.0326793684256 99% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.185294117647 0.0861772015684 215% => Less determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00294117647059 0.021408717616 14% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0147058823529 0.011925033212 123% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1981.0 1933.35771543 102% => OK
No of words: 309.0 316.048096192 98% => OK
Chars per words: 6.41100323625 6.12580529183 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.368932038835 0.374742101984 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.323624595469 0.28420135186 114% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.284789644013 0.203846283523 140% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.216828478964 0.137316102897 158% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15956401335 2.80594681477 113% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.037074148 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501618122977 0.56093040696 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.4576065497 60.7387585426 83% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.1666666667 20.7743622355 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5182156447 49.517814964 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.055555556 127.492653851 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 20.7743622355 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.444444444444 0.814263465372 55% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 49.5291262136 49.1944974215 101% => OK
Elegance: 2.10294117647 1.69124875643 124% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.43679334504 0.332605444948 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.121661032557 0.102741220458 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0578190110686 0.0668466124924 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.627641495824 0.534860350844 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.153044391638 0.148594505496 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.222621292082 0.134430193775 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789402506149 0.0742795772207 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.664103405808 0.324371583561 205% => Paragraphs have same ideas.
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0553460906305 0.0638462369009 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.370699698986 0.228012699653 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173431708867 0.058150111329 30% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.41683366733 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 1.9629258517 306% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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