The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Due to sedentary lifestyle and wrong choice of food, people are becoming more obese and thus, giving an invitation to various diseases. It is necessary to overcome health issues before they attack on the body system and make the situation worst. I don't agree with the point that government funding has any role to play in this.
To begin with, it is a duty of an individual to take care of their own health in a way which doesn't lead them to consult a doctor now and then. Some serious problems include BP, diabetes, cholesterol, improper heart function, cancer and many more need immediate medical attention. Do we ever think what causes to these reach up to such an extent? I believe, we don't. For example, during weekends, it has become a household trend to order a variety of cuisine, mostly. After hectic work schedule throughout the week and having an outside food, we forget to burn the calories generated and again, we start preparing for another week. Result? Severe complications and at the end, use of heavy dose medicines.
On the other side, it is always not possible for each person to afford costliest treatments. In certain cases, the disease may not always be related to lifestyle, it might be hereditary. Also, an economic status of such humans may not be able to pay exorbitant fees of good doctors, old people in particular. In this type of scenario, government funding comes in to the picture. It will be a boon for them and a great relief to much extent.
To conclude, I would like to say in overall, to avoid such consequences, people should follow an old proverb "prevention is better than cure" very seriously. Though, government can provide an adequate budget for preventive measures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, then, thus, for example, in particular, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84459459459 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71048710039 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672297297297 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1002615059 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3529411765 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4117647059 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23529411765 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15790799596 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450592635632 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527852771493 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0880700959973 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026468555261 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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