QUESTION: SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT REST AND SLEEP ARE BEST METHODS TO RELAX,WHILE OTHERS THINK THAT IT CAN BE DONE BY INVOLVING IN SOME ACTIVITIES LIKE SPORTS.DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE. AND GIVE YOUR VIEW.
Relaxation is vital component for an individuals well-being. Some people believe that sleeping and resting are the best ways to relax, whereas, others think that getting involved in sports is a better way to de-stress. I Strongly opine that, taking adequate rest and good sleep are essential as they help in rejuvenating
the body and provide health benefits.
Firstly, to deal with issues related to stress, it is important to repose or take a nap. For instance, after a long and tiresome day at work, going through
immense pressure at workplace, an individual might not be in a state of doing anything. At such juncture, the body and mind demands rest which is quite understandable. Moreover,
it helps an individual to recharge for the next day, beating all the anxiety of the previous outing at work.
Another major point to consider is the physical fitness of a person.The benefits we get by taking ample sleep and good rest are innumerable.For instance, according
to some health experts, a good nights sleep can be beneficial to lose weight, which is the main cause of heart related diseases. Another instance is, as per
a research conducted by a famous magazine ,a good nights sleep will boost your memory.This is certainly a very good way to improve health by almost doing nothing.
On the contrary, it has also been observed that sports is considered as a good way to recline, as it helps a person to socially mingle and also increase the fitness levels.
In conclusion, to deal with the day to day work related pressures, stress and enhance physical condition, sufficient amount of rest and sleep is inevitable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, moreover, so, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97818181818 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78293263476 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592727272727 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.070748838 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.454545455 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.38176352705 228% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165379001213 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592514314769 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793098749975 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0555186303569 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704020559825 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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