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A recent survey shows, the juvenile delinquents are increasing at a mammoth rate in several nations. Some people assert that the main reason of this problem is that they do not get the moral and ethical values from parents and teachers. However, some people are condemn about this statement. I agree with the formal statement which I can portray in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, there are multifarious reasons which are propitious to my viewpoint. The predominant reason is, in the fast pace of life, mostly both the parents are working and have hectic schedules. Due to dearth of time, they do not able to give some quality time to their wards and taught them some moral and ethical values. Hence, children grow up bereft of parental love. Although,the maid servants do take good care of them but there is no touch of love or affection that children grave for. Therefore, this leads them to feel neglected and in order to fill the void in their life they tend to go astray.
Leaping further, the social media, society puts a great significant influence on the children mind. Children easily grasp the things, what they see in their surrounding areas.Moreover, nowadays, almost all the movies are based on violent land aggression, which puts an adverse affects on the mind of juveniles. After, watching these types of movies, they also tend to copy their action in their real lives, consequently, which gives them detrimental aftermaths. Sometimes, these can become a reason of ruin their whole life.
To recapitulate, I reiterate my view point that juvenile crimes are increasing day by day, because children grow up deprived of their parents love and guidance. Moreover, I cogitate that parents should bestow their quality time to their wards and give them the guidance, so that they cannot go astray.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... delinquents are increasing at a mammoth rate in several nations. Some people ass...
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...hat they see in their surrounding areas.Moreover, nowadays, almost all the movies are ba...
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... land aggression, which puts an adverse affects on the mind of juveniles. After, watchi...
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... recapitulate, I reiterate my view point that juvenile crimes are increasing day ...
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...ty time to their wards and give them the guidance, so that they cannot go astray....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9868852459 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61092324337 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596721311475 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1126026146 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0625 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170485591981 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569122894715 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039286702609 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105389819543 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231989396944 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.