Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development then and experiences we may have in our life.
Which do you consider to be the major influence
According to the research, it is noticed that the person are born with some crackers, has great impact on the person personality and development. However, some people search that other thing, which are experience during the life as more effect on the mind. I agree with the latter statement, which I can portray in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, there are umpteen reasons, which are propitious to my view point. The predominant reason is, it is commonly said the children has the pure souls, they do not have any vice such as aggression, violence on the time of birth. They do only dose things, which are done by their surrounding persons. Therefore, it is advised by the ancestors that do not do any wrong thing in front of the children, which put adverse effect on the mind of the juveniles.
Leaping further, it is depend on the ambience, in which child grow up. The society has a great influence on the mind and personality of the person. If, he observe only crimes, violence and aggression in his life then he also do the same. In other hand, if a child grow in a good ambience then he become a good person in his life. For instance, it is observed that criminals are not offender from their birth but the some severe conditions are incite them to commit a crime.
To recapitulate, everyone has their own views, I do not deny any of them but I cogitate that, it all depends on the surroundings area of the children in, which they grow up and what they experienced during their life
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: depended
...e juveniles. Leaping further, it is depend on the ambience, in which child grow up...
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Suggestion: observes
...d and personality of the person. If, he observe only crimes, violence and aggression in...
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Suggestion: does
...and aggression in his life then he also do the same. In other hand, if a child gro...
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Message: Did you mean 'same'?
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...e not offender from their birth but the some severe conditions are incite them to co...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'incited'.
Suggestion: incited
...irth but the some severe conditions are incite them to commit a crime. To recapi...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'surroundings'' or 'surrounding's'?
Suggestion: surroundings'; surrounding's
... I cogitate that, it all depends on the surroundings area of the children in, which they gro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, therefore, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59259259259 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57268547678 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540740740741 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0721151163 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3846153846 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203227264511 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718703450266 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400193312182 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115305857845 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470937027699 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.