Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?
Over the booming eras of technology, there are more and more experimental examinations. This leads to the dilemmas that such projects should be performed and handled by the states instead of personal organizations. From my viewpoint, these works belong to the responsibility of both of them.
On the one hand, it cannot be denied the pivotal role of the authorities regarding monitoring and fulfilling scientific research and development through a variety of measures. Firstly, the most important contributing factor behind each experimental project is the capital, especially tasks serving the benefit of the community. A typical example is the rainwater source treatment plan and due to water is not only the natural resource that people live without but also is the national property. Secondly, if scientists do not participate in these projects through the governments' policies in order to attract talents, they could not achieve.
On the other hand, despite the states' investment in experimental investigation, the contribution of private funds to these works should not be ignored since the asset of each authority is limited, while this source must allocate to an abundance of services such as education, infrastructure, and health care. As a result, the authority and citizens would reap certainly merits from the personal organizations, which means the heavy burdens on the state may be released. Not to mention that the experimental operation by the private enterprises can pave the way for geniuses from around the world taking part in based on their huge finance.
In conclusion, scientific investigation and growth is a key element that reflexes the prospering of every country. Hence it requires the responsibility of the authority, personal companies as well as people from all strata in terms of overseeing and performing
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Suggestion: states'; state's
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52613240418 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43163300603 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616724738676 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.7738517 49.4020404114 212% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.6 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.5 7.06120827912 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108061083095 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034240601235 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338592059294 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0564455102459 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232664009364 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.39 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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