Shopping has become a favorite pastime among young people. Why do you think it is like that, and do you think they must be encouraged to do other things rather than shopping?
Human’s lifestyle had undergone incredible alterations in recent couple of decades. Even though there are numerous leisure time activities, many youngsters choose shopping as their favorite. This essay will discuss the reasons of this and also suggest some alternatives
One of the prime causative factors for many teenagers for choosing shopping as a prime leisure activity is, convenient. People go to shopping malls where they can find the different type of brands and options to try and buy. Some people go for window shopping to rejuvenate themselves. A recent survey on 1500 people age between 25-30 proves that shopping is the prominent leisure time activity because it is convenient and easiest way to squander time. So it is clear that shopping is one of the paramount variable to spend the leisure time
There are several other options to look at instead of shopping, some of them are; having a hobby, involve in some physical exercise. Allocating spare time in hobby improves the experience in hobby and might turn it into a prime activity. Exercising in leisure time helps body to be in shape and rejuvenates mind. According to research by University of California people who are less involved in shopping and assign the time to improve their health are more successful. Hence, it is evident that there are several other options to consider other than shopping
On a birds eye view, the imperative factors for many teenagers to consider shopping as a prime leisure time solution are convenience and effectiveness, and according to my view they should be encouraged to do other things like going to a gym and having a hobby.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to shop'.
Suggestion: to shop
...time activities, many youngsters choose shopping as their favorite. This essay will disc...
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Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to shop'.
Suggestion: to shop
...factors for many teenagers for choosing shopping as a prime leisure activity is, conveni...
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Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...different type of brands and options to try and buy. Some people go for window shopping...
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Line 5, column 559, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... options to consider other than shopping On a birds eye view, the imperative fact...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07352941176 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74254849216 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551470588235 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.098409 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.454545455 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27272727273 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154692174306 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550281525425 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060835743881 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999314250756 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590761264603 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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