Should governments make decisions about people’s lifestyle, or should people make their own decisions?
Government can take decisions about development of society and environment protection. Individuals must be allowed to take their own decisions rather than the government should not insist one to follow a particular lifestyle. The reasons for people having their own right to take decisions is explained in the following passage.
On one hand, people have freedom to design their life. However, government can't decide how people have to live irrespective of their wish. Additionally, people are with minimum common scenes to plan their lifestyle with lots of enjoyment and adventures. Indeed, Individuals has their own right to enjoy their lives to an extent. But it should not cross its limit like spoiling the community due to their bad activities. For instance, people are driving car by consuming alcohol which leads to accidents. In such cases, authorities should take strict action on such kind of people. Even, it is better to assign penalties if one drive vehicle by drinking liquor.
On the other hand, authorities have right to control the bad activities in the nation. At the same time, they should keep rules against the people who are getting addicted to negative ways to survive their life. For example, many people are selling drugs to earn more money which badly effects the society mostly the young generation. Accordingly, the government should provide a licence to the people who sell drugs. Also, the individuals who sell these medications without licence must be kept in prison.
After having considered all the above discussed points, we can finally draw a conclusion that the authorities have no right to decide people's lifestyle. It would be better if the government take appropriate action on people who do bad things.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 76, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... design their life. However, government cant decide how people have to live irrespec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, finally, however, if, so, for example, for instance, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20494699647 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69783762674 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572438162544 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.1959592586 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.8333333333 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7222222222 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365612224018 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11293260635 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747619938133 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220763888665 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0931168202535 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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