Should private schools receive government funding Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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Should private schools receive government funding? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Without any doubts, society is divided into two groups as per the distinct mindset of different people. Therefore, there has become a debatable issue whether government funding is necessary to private schools or not. This essay will not only shed light on both perceptions but also my point of view will be elaborated in conclusion.
To commence with the first notion, funding of private schools is from different types of organizations or some private companies or other partners, there aim is to make profit for the related parties through providing education to rich people’s children. However, there are number of non-profit education institution which provides education to differently abled children where authorities are not interested in their development or they are minority people, off course they deserve recognition and support from government, to exemplify, education of blind and deaf children,
Moving towards the second argument of this debate, the first point is that the standard of public schools will reduce the quality if the government divert the funds to private schools so that facilities available to poor children will be in disastrous. To avoid social and economic inequality, government should provide more fund to public schools and increase the budget every year instead of increasing the wealth of private parties because educated youths are the backbone of every nation and it will happen only through the development of public institution.
In a conclusion, according to my perspective, visionary leader can create a wealthy nation with the advancement of education with cultural improvement not only one area but also in every aspect of education.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42585551331 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85843061299 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608365019011 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 155.121019247 49.4020404114 314% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 203.857142857 106.682146367 191% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.5714285714 20.7667163134 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143977587085 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701130497068 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056976193439 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0770510155844 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476332917446 0.056905535591 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.9 13.0946893788 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.46 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.81 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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