Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Not only people who smoke suffer from many deadly diseases, but the people surround also get impacted from that smoke. This is the reason that many people say that smoking should be banned on public places. I am in compete accord with this statement and believe that if government is not able to persuade people to leave smoking habit then at least they should be prohibited on public places.
To begin, smoking is a dangerously bad habit which leads to number of lethal diseases like lung cancer, mouth cancer and many more. The chemicals in tobacco damage airways of lungs, blood cells and alo weaken the immune system towards infections. Its impact is not visible overnight, but with passage of time it causes serious harm for person’s health and in long run it can make person suffer tremendously from the pain it may give.
Furthermore, it has been universally proved that passive smoking is more dangerous and can cause more harm to the person’s health. In this way, the people who do not smoke but because they inhale smoke owing to someone smoking nearby get affected by it. For example, one of my friend is suffering from lung cancer, although he never did smoking. This is because of his father, who is habitual to smoke in their house every day. Owing to harmful impact on other people, smoking should be banned on public places and there should be separate places for smokers to smoke. This problem has been realized by many organizations like IT companies as they offer separate smoking area to their employees who smoke, so that other employees will not suffer.
To conclude, smoking is a habit which is really difficult to leave, hence, government should ensure that owing to smokers, at least general public should not be affected adversely. Hence, smoking on public places should be prohibited and any guilty should be dealt with iron hands.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 225, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'smokes'.
Suggestion: smokes
...ause they inhale smoke owing to someone smoking nearby get affected by it. For example,...
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Line 5, column 343, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'smoke'
Suggestion: smoke
...from lung cancer, although he never did smoking. This is because of his father, who is ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 133, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... ensure that owing to smokers, at least general public should not be affected adversely. Hence...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'so', 'then', 'at least', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.240223463687 0.247107183377 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.189944134078 0.155533422707 122% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0893854748603 0.0946595960268 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0446927374302 0.0501214627716 89% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0418994413408 0.0437548338989 96% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122905027933 0.122226691241 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0502793296089 0.0403226058552 125% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.40739289092 2.80594681477 86% => OK
Infinitives: 0.036312849162 0.0326793684256 111% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0474860335196 0.0861772015684 55% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0335195530726 0.021408717616 157% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0167597765363 0.011925033212 141% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1879.0 1933.35771543 97% => OK
No of words: 319.0 316.048096192 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.89028213166 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.398119122257 0.374742101984 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.222570532915 0.28420135186 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.119122257053 0.203846283523 58% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0752351097179 0.137316102897 55% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40739289092 2.80594681477 86% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.037074148 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53605015674 0.56093040696 96% => OK
Word variations: 56.1387352546 60.7387585426 92% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.7857142857 20.7743622355 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3685780501 49.517814964 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.214285714 127.492653851 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7743622355 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.785714285714 0.814263465372 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 45.0427675773 49.1944974215 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.49494949495 1.69124875643 88% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314391328151 0.332605444948 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.136256881073 0.102741220458 133% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0956248396625 0.0668466124924 143% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.542604346511 0.534860350844 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.130156167846 0.148594505496 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134330008205 0.134430193775 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688431209458 0.0742795772207 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.265373365955 0.324371583561 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0683926865487 0.0638462369009 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218853594421 0.228012699653 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627824777949 0.058150111329 108% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.68436873747 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 5.90881763527 34% => OK
Negative topic words: 9.0 2.5751503006 349% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.