In some areas of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
What is your opinion about this?
Most areas in US have restrictions that adolescents should be permitted to leave their homes at night only if they are accompanied by an elder person. I, personally agree with the viewpoint as this will not only ensure the safety of the children but also keep them away from wrong influences.
With changing times it has become essential that teenagers are vulnerable to certain situations which can be avoided when guided by seniors. Recently, an inflation of crime rates such as mugging, rapes, robbery, murder, etc has been observed. In situations like this, it is unlikely that these adolescents know how to deal with them. Therefore, it is essential that they are guided by adults, who have better knowledge and sound consciousness. This will also allow guardians to be free from anxiety about their children.
Furthermore, these young people may easily be misleaded when allowed to go out alone, by their peers or persons of similar age group. For instance, when a teenager is challenged to do a task they find it imperative to stand up to it to prove they are fearless and dynamic. But they do not assess the dangers associated with it, which may prove to be life staking. Being with an adult means, these peers will not get carried away in the pursuit of adventure.
In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that teenagers must be allowed to go out at night if there are accompanied by a senior person who can protect them as well as keep them safe from their dangerous tasks often brought about by similar aged teenagers.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81886792453 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6332377227 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5747249641 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.416666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255198687953 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880669605494 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558233631107 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153052138041 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.006215845104 0.056905535591 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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