Some countries are struggling with an increase in the rate of crime. Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce these increasing levels of crime. To what extent do you agree?
The increasing crime-rate is matter of concern for most of the countries. To keep a check on crimes, the defense system can be emboldened and police force can be enlarged to patrol greatest area of the country. In my opinion, there are many other ways along with strengthening of defence in the country.
Undoubtedly, the country’s security is the first priority. The government when strengthens the defense by modernized training and equipment, it's definitely going to pose a threat for criminals. The police force should be present in populated area because this would make thieves and <span style="font-size: 19.36px;">burglars</span> think twice before committing a crime; they would hesitate taking a chance in such circumstances. Advanced monitoring tools like CCTV and scanners can help the police in patrolling; the footage can threaten the burglars as it would bring the offender behind the bars due to film captured. Thus, modern machines and its training play indispensable role in keeping the crime-rate under control.
Furthermore, the crime awareness programs should be held by police to train the citizens. This includes using sirens and knowing help line numbers in time of need. The transportation system should also be improved to reach on time, when the victim dials emergency number for police help.
To sum up, I pen down saying adequate police force and modern tools should be used to mitigate keep the crime-rates in control. Moreover, the public should be trained to use tools such as siren for over-all safety and security of country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 175, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'patrol the greatest'.
Suggestion: patrol the greatest
...ned and police force can be enlarged to patrol greatest area of the country. In my opinion, the...
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Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...e by modernized training and equipment, its definitely going to pose a threat for c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, moreover, so, then, thus, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.384 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37239618076 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9009383872 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.538461538 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136608347534 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555459657106 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535358238927 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0874835055859 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374711352713 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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