In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels health and fitness is decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
From almost last 2 decades, globally obesity has become a ,major concern. In developed countries like America, United Kingdom, obesity rates are very high and due to which people are facing numerous health problems. Moreover, the massive increase in people’s body weight is also impacting them adapting fitness routine in their daily life.
Varoius reasons are there for increasing body weight which are impacting people’s health and fitness. To begin with, modern life style is the biggest root cause of the underlying problem. Nowadays people are working in big multinational companies and spending log hours at work. This limits their time to cook and eat healthy food. As a result, they rely more on readymade food which can be prepared in a very short time. Also, because of lack of time, majority of people skip or avoid to have regular fitness routine in their life. This kind of lifestyle is resulting in poor health and physical fitness of almost everybody in most of the countries. Secondly, with high pay pakages, people are travelling in cars and spend entire days in sitting positions. This worsens their blood levels people end up in severe health problems like diabetes , blood pressure
However, several measures can be taken to reduce the body weight and get rid of health and fitness issues. To start with, people develop habit of doing fitness excercises on daily basis. They can choose their suitable time. This routine will itself bring a noticeable in their health and they will feel more energetic and relaxed. Apart from this, these days many companies are providing gym facilities, so employees should use those. Furthermore, people should read more on pros and cons of unlealthy junk food and learn to bring health food habits in their life.
In conclusion, it is true that obesity is causing severe health and fitness problems across the world, but causiously adapting fitness routine like Yoga and meditation can be extremely beneficial to their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, apart from, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, it is true, to begin with, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11656441718 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47129618766 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585889570552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8586745506 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262418573152 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767190971228 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057664550601 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166376025991 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0127293610575 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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