It is true for few countries children to start their study from school at an early age such as four but other countries start it at seven. A number of people believe that study at school early is influencing relationships between parents and their child. I am unsure whether go to school early is pros or cons, and will, therefore examine this topic in this essay and give my personal opinion.
To attend school early ought to more benefits for youth. First and foremost, schooling is the way to encourage children to boost their brain at an early age. Parents and children could often have a conversation together, thus developing the capability of thinking and skills such as social skill and critical thinking. For instance, children learned some facts but no chance or too shy to ask their classmates or teacher, they might question their parents at home. Most of the father and mother are willing to answer the question and explain in a tremendous way. Another significant reason in favor is that children would build their moral value before the adolescent period. To create and identify what is integrity, honesty and truthfulness are better for the students to study it from school. Without enough education, a number of teenagers to learn negative things such as incredibly early smoke even eats drugs.
One of the disadvantages is parents and children will spend less time together. For most of the adults, this is one of their losses when they recalled their childhood. Family plays and enjoys facilities together just for fun is the best memories for many people.
To sum up, I tend to agree for children to go to school at an early age but they need some time with their parents and will less harmful between their relationships.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: opinion
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to negative'
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Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to negative'.
Suggestion: to negative
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, therefore, thus, for instance, such as, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85953177258 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54737552112 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5341610117 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.8666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370022859825 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123882373846 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135467736293 0.0667982634062 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239748387775 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155523424287 0.056905535591 273% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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