A topic like this has been debatable for decades. It reminds me of the saying " Marriage is not just a porridge that you spill out if it's too hot". It is a huge decision and requires a lot of thought and insight. It can change the whole life of an individual whether it be a man or a woman.
When marriages are arranged by the parents, they tend to consider all aspects rather than just one or two. Their experience in life comes into play and hence the opposite partner, better suited with the environment of the house is chosen. This way disputes not only with the spouse but also other family members are less and the marriage tends to last longer.
While, On the other hand, when people choose their own marriage they ensure that they are compatible with each other. Understanding and love are like the weights in a weighing scale. It cannot be stable if not equal. For instance, a recent survey in Mumbai has shown that the longer people knew each other before marriage, the less they fought after. Moreover, Parents may not completely be aware of the likes and dislikes of their child, may have an orthodox opinion and hence may end up selecting an incompatible partner. The chances are less if the person himself selects his spouse.
Therefore, I personally feel, Marriage is nothing but an amalgamation of love, compromise, trust and care. Whatever may be the case, it should be a happy one. And, In my opinion, it turns out to be a happy one if people choose their own partners.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 224, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... requires a lot of thought and insight. It can change the whole life of an individ...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vidual whether it be a man or a woman. When marriages are arranged by the paren...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60223048327 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44976053554 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602230483271 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5324662971 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.375 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8125 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234535487499 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061185827014 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733603531705 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129547871136 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555379021821 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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