Some employers believe that job applicants' social skills are more important than their academic qualifications. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
These days many job seekers are expected to have social skills compared to their academic accolades. Social skills are important to build healthy working culture, whereas, technical skills could be acquired on the job. In the following passage, importance of social skills are demonstrated vis a` vis educational degrees.
On one hand, many institutions require the candidates to demonstrate more social skills at workplace versus the educational qualifications. It is imperative for a prospective employee to be a team player as well as a team leader. Social skills include happy and cheerful personality at office. People spend most of their time at work place. if the work place is gloomy and monotonous, people lose interest to work. Having good repo at work creates less friction at office and allows easy transition at new work environment.
On the other hand, technical knowledge is a required skill to perform one’s role. Without knowing what to do at work place, a candidate will not perform his job duties properly. A basic knowledge of work is expected by any employer. Technical skills can horned through experience. Unless, the person is cooperative, enthusiastic and socially palatable within the office group, work is difficult to be achieved. An arrogant co-worker can offend other talented and efficient employee to leave the company.
Hence, some employers give more importance to social skills than their academic achievements of a job applicant. To have maximise the productivity of employees, it is important they thrive in happy environment
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 342, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...spend most of their time at work place. if the work place is gloomy and monotonous...
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Line 7, column 123, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'maximised'.
Suggestion: maximised
...hievements of a job applicant. To have maximise the productivity of employees, it is im...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, thus, well, whereas, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4048582996 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97400871334 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603238866397 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5661021881 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.5294117647 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5294117647 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82352941176 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228185551981 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786719899759 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101832507241 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173949914059 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107983297116 0.056905535591 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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