Some people argue that competitive sports are good for bringing together different people and cultures. Others argue that these sports can cause problems and increase conflicts between nations. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion.
Recently, the number of sports competitions between different countries have increased unprecedented in scale. Some community members claim that these tournaments have a significant role in building close relationships with other nations and communities. Contrastingly, others assume that these events are only responsible for raising tensions and rival thoughts among people of diverse regional backgrounds. There are contingent arguments on both sides, which will be discussed in detail, followed by my own perspective on this matter.
To begin with, it is totally true that people eagerly tend to become familiar with the cultural diversity when travel to other countries to attend these championships. To clarify this, understanding and closeness towards the richness of traditions has far-reaching impact on friendly international relationships and greatly promoted to organize such kinds of sports events. This is amply illustrated by the fact that tournaments like Olympics, world cups attracts more visitors from all around the world to witness these spectacular contests. Hence, they can get the chance to experience the hospitality and lavishness of local community to greet people from other provinces of the world.
However, undoubtedly, some assume that these events remain ineffective to bring unity among people at all. during these competitive events, supporters of one team may raised against others and even though players can also lose their temperament to win the game, which may result in increased conflicts and disputes among two different societies. As a result, these clashes could have negative effect on the relationships of different countries. For instance, in cricket and football tournaments between two regions, fans of both teams ore often seen abusing each other to show that their team is best in comparison to other.
In conclusion, although some of the reasons in favor of these sports completions are totally justify to raise togetherness and warm relations between diverse cultural regions, I personally believe that such kind of championships will only create conflicts and exaggerate the negative emotions towards other communities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, may, so, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1860.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6880733945 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00674922793 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614678899083 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.6089235284 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.076923077 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1538461538 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272778551713 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900633744356 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414721161745 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160921940083 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442781135462 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.