Some people argue that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others believe that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, there are two schools of thoughts on how to deal with difficulties in life; some people think that we should accept challenging circumstances in life, while others, including me, believe that the best solution is tackle the problem in order to thrive. I will provide the reasoning behind both perspectives in this essay and demonstrate my point of view in the conclusion.
People often try to adapt difficulties in life due to several reasons. Firstly, it helps people's mentality and emotional health. It is true that through life, every individual might go through problems, such as unpleasant work atmosphere, unemployment or financial problems, which put people under a lot of pressure. However, having a bad mood for a long period of time due to these problems would lead to illnesses such as depression, stress-related diseases, or obesity. Secondly, hard situations in life might lead a person to wrongful reactions. This includes, but not limited, to committing a crime, involving in frauds, or addiction to drugs. People, who are involved in these misbehaviors, might have a better life in the long-term if they accept their difficulties and learn to adapt.
On the other hand, there are critics who think the best way to deal with a difficulty is to challenge it. This strategy would give people hope and direction to live. There are people everywhere, who try to solve their problems by positivity and hardworking on a daily basis. In this mindset, not only people would be stressed with new problems, but also, they would be excited to solve a new challenge, since they think that only in this way they could thrive and demonstrate their potentials. The advancement of technologies and the convenience of our modern life are also relying on these people who embrace challenges, instead of merely accept them. People, like Steve Jobs or Elon Musk, have helped humanity by having this mindset through their life.
In conclusion, while there is some upside with accepting bad conditions, I think, there are more advantages for societies with having people who challenge problems in order to a better life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84642131205 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551428571429 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7028690253 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151475219473 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506884873159 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289132109987 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989849606195 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.011044212942 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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