Some people become famous at a very young age. Is this a good thing or a bad thing
Nowadays, everyone wants to be popular and the children are not exceptions. Owing to the media and technology, this has become comparatively easy for people these days. However, this trend has given rise to a question, whether getting popular specifically at young age brings more benefits or drawbacks. I am more inclined to the latter one, that it has numerous side-effects. In the following essay we would discuss both views before reaching to a conclusion.
On the one hand, this phenomenon has few certain advantages. To begin with, kids start earning at a very small age, thus making them independent. Additionally, they get public acceptance, so everyone loves and respect them. Moreover, they become more confident, as a result, they perform well in every aspect of their life. Thus, it is evident that becoming famous at an early age brings personal as well as social benefits to a child.
On the other hand, there are numerous disadvantages. Firstly, youngsters cannot handle this fame. They get out of the hands of their parents. They may not respect and obey their elders. As is said, it is not possible for everyone to handle the fame. Secondly, their academics would definitely be affected due to spending more time on activities, who made them famous. For instance, if a youngster is famous because he is doing well in cricket or dancing, then to be consistent performer, he would need to practice his skills on regular basis. Thereby, leaving less or no time for study. Finally, they may not get time to socialise and play due to limited leisure time that they have, which are also essential for all-round growth of a person. Consequently, the demerits of getting famous at an early age are huge.
In conclusion, after looking at both sides it is apparent that the drawbacks of being renowned outnumber its advantages. Hence, I would suggest that parents should teach their tots to spend more time on their studies and sports, instead of becoming a celebrity.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96696696697 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72851867935 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585585585586 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 5.43587174349 294% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4486149321 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1818181818 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1363636364 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63636363636 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162233687522 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448222081076 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563125840797 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102826836042 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471444262026 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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