Some people believe that after hundred years life will be easier for most of the people while others were unsure What is your opinion

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Some people believe that after hundred years life will be easier for most of the people, while others were unsure. What is your opinion?

As technology plays an increasingly more central role in our lives, it has been suggested that there will an unprecedented incline in not only having comfortable but also having convenient life-style. While some people cite that, they were not so sure about the future, others think that life after a century will be easier. I completely agree with this assertion and moreover this trend has already been started.

It is an irrefutable fact, that modern science has already dominated the world, making things ease-of-use. Even though there are some people who are skeptical about this accelerating advancements in science, that could affect negatively in future, it is foolish to not to recognize the technology that could allow the user to manage it. Thanks to it, we can able to achieve simple solutions to complex queries such as; android control, artificial intelligence, neural networks, machine learning and even open heart surgeries, everything is at, the touch of a button in humans hand. In near future it is possible to move through portals from one country to other with in no time, that could save huge money and time. Therefore, the raise of science in future cannot be underestimated

Nevertheless to say that, we cannot predict the life after 10 decades as the technology has its flip-side, it may produce some disturbing by-products if it reaches in the hands of evil. As we know that, the data in the world is growing exponentially, there machines to handle it, these are often programmed with self learning algorithms, which could make things worse to turn back. The sensitive information of the people will be public such as; medical history, loans, pensions, and even credit card details, this could give corporate sectors an opportunity to avail this information and misuse it.

Despite the fact that, science and technology has risen in terms of quality, the quality of it is debatable. In my opinion, after 100 years, if there is security involved in every aspect of our life, we can see a flourishing future.

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Average: 9.5 (2 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 238, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...n science, that could affect negatively in future, it is foolish to not to recognize the ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
...e in future cannot be underestimated Nevertheless to say that, we cannot predict the life...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05325443787 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76601745497 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603550295858 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.977665719 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.333333333 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1666666667 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16123341062 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593121421625 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932149340736 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101015253981 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624128960182 0.056905535591 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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