Some people believe that air travels should be allowed to grow without limits. Others think that the government should limit air travels. Discuss both views & give your opinion.
The twentieth century has witnessed a lot of advancements in technology, especially in the field of communication and transportation. Nowadays, millions of people all around the globe, travel by airplanes. Owing to this development, some people suggest that airlines should grow unlimitedly whereas other school of thoughts radically oppose this. In the following essay we would discuss both sides before concluding the one.
For one, air travels offer multitude of benefits. Firstly, this is the fastest way to commute from one place to another saving lots of time. Secondly, the prices of air-travel have decreased drastically. Earlier, these were considered to be an option for elite group only, but now they are affordable to commoners as well. Lastly, they offer employment to thousands of people, paying taxes and hence playing considerable role in the economy of a nation. These benefits clearly show, this transportation medium is a boon for human being.
On the other hand, there are some apparent side-effects as well. To begin with, airplanes emit smoke and make loud noise, thereby, polluting the environment. Additionally, we have seen many instances of flights being hijacked. Moreover, some people have height phobia and start feeling breathing problems while in flights. However, these are some demerits of this commutation mode, they are not sound enough.
To conclude, after looking both sides, it is apparent that the positive sides of air-travel industry outnumber its demerits, therefore, making it the most preferred mode of travelling. Hence, it should be allowed to grow indefinitely. I have firm belief, in the future more people would opt for this way of travel.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, lastly, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39097744361 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89642563764 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68045112782 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5735930058 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6666666667 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7777777778 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213613888122 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637903066073 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638441254055 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129425248376 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526660567708 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.39 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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