Some People believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational; otherwise they are a complete waste of time.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.
Educational competence is considered to be the utmost requirement for children now a day. Parents are quite keen about their children’s education as well as they keep an eye on their leisure activities, because they don’t want their children to waste their time at the cost of education. I tend to disagree with this belief of the people that leisure activities of children could affect their studies if they are not educational. This point will be established by analyzing the facts that leisure activities have their own importance in personality grooming of children as well as these are the major source of entertainment for children.
One of the important aspects is that education is not all about reading, Writing & getting good marks in exams; rather it is grooming process of children. Leisure activities like chatting, Sports & travelling/outing helps children to gain a vast exposure of different aspects of life. As an example, if the children give a proportionate attention to both Studies and other Sports or outing activities they would gain variety of experience that elevates them a balanced personality. An imbalanced personality would live most probably an imbalanced life. It demonstrates that free time activities are equally important as education is.
Another angle of looking into it is that modern education is getting complex & tough with every passing day. Children have to spend major part of the day with books to enable themselves to compete with other students. The study pressure keeps on building which ultimately causes stress amongst the students. In this situation, some extracurricular healthy activities enable children to reduce their study pressures as well they relax them. They feel quite energetic and active during studies, as a result it perks up their studies & enable them to compete and succeed. This proves the fact, that leisure activities help children’s education in productive way& these are not wastage of time anymore.
Following the analyses above, the factors like character building and stress management due to leisure activities prove their significance in Children’s life. Educational Activities are very important for children to stand on the merits of today’s competitive environment. But free time Positive activities like sports, travelling & music should be permitted to the children in order to enhance their learning skills in life.
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'well', 'as a result', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.277389277389 0.247107183377 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.149184149184 0.155533422707 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0839160839161 0.0946595960268 89% => OK
Adverbs: 0.041958041958 0.0501214627716 84% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0582750582751 0.0437548338989 133% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.130536130536 0.122226691241 107% => OK
Participles: 0.030303030303 0.0403226058552 75% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.05871784375 2.80594681477 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.032634032634 0.0326793684256 100% => OK
Particles: 0.002331002331 0.00163938923432 142% => OK
Determiners: 0.0839160839161 0.0861772015684 97% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.011655011655 0.021408717616 54% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00699300699301 0.011925033212 59% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2437.0 1933.35771543 126% => OK
No of words: 380.0 316.048096192 120% => OK
Chars per words: 6.41315789474 6.12580529183 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20517956788 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.397368421053 0.374742101984 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.328947368421 0.28420135186 116% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.247368421053 0.203846283523 121% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.173684210526 0.137316102897 126% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05871784375 2.80594681477 109% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.037074148 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515789473684 0.56093040696 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 56.2147940225 60.7387585426 93% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.1111111111 20.7743622355 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1388408304 49.517814964 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.388888889 127.492653851 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 20.7743622355 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.388888888889 0.814263465372 48% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 54.0058479532 49.1944974215 110% => OK
Elegance: 1.75700934579 1.69124875643 104% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23115082548 0.332605444948 69% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.128311076707 0.102741220458 125% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0720486380117 0.0668466124924 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.501605132936 0.534860350844 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.144787507567 0.148594505496 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970165546803 0.134430193775 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606514349576 0.0742795772207 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.345861440132 0.324371583561 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.018272841505 0.0638462369009 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16649217166 0.228012699653 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429330544585 0.058150111329 74% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 5.90881763527 203% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 10.4468937876 163% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.