Some people believe that extreme sports should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is thought by some people that extreme sports should not be allowed due high risks to the participants’ or, even, viewers’ health. To totally agree with this statement and think that such kinds of sport could be harmful for society.
To begin with, there is now definition of the extreme sports. Usually, it implies diverse competitions which content perilous conditions for participants, such as high speed, movements on the altitudes or survival in danger environment. First mention of the extreme sports I heard in the mid of 1990s on the TV channels, which have been increasing their ratings by such programs. The most popular TV show was ‘Deadly racing’ on the Euro Sport channel. It had lots of viewers, in spite of relatively high paying rate for the Euro Sport channel. Nowadays, this program is still existing and amount of viewers hasn’t fallen.
However, contemporary statistics, which have been hidden by channel owners, shows us that extreme sports frequently cause dramatic consequences. Firstly, every 20th racing has at least one injured and every 50th has one fatal outcome. There are different reasons to this, but the deaths haven’t stopped for the last twenty years of extreme racing existence and the best solution is stop these events.
Secondly, young generations, especially, teenagers are very easily motivated by such ‘tough’ guys that climb the mountains, jump from the abysses on the rope or drive racing cars reaching 300 mph. Contemporary adolescents dreaming to become like famous extreme sportsmen from the TV screen and making first attempts to repeat someone’s trick and the outcome could be also unpredictable.
Thus, I strongly believe that governments should ban all extreme sports as they are dangerous for people and, moreover, demand lots of expenditures for their realization. Our kids should be encouraged to become that kind of people, which take care about population and don’t steal budget money for the useless tricks.
My personal conclusion is that, extreme sports should be banned and this decision will significantly benefit society.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'thus', 'at least', 'kind of', 'such as', 'in spite of', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.260442260442 0.247107183377 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.142506142506 0.155533422707 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0982800982801 0.0946595960268 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.04914004914 0.0501214627716 98% => OK
Pronouns: 0.027027027027 0.0437548338989 62% => OK
Prepositions: 0.103194103194 0.122226691241 84% => OK
Participles: 0.041769041769 0.0403226058552 104% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.96231121725 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.017199017199 0.0326793684256 53% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0687960687961 0.0861772015684 80% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.017199017199 0.021408717616 80% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.012285012285 0.011925033212 103% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2139.0 1933.35771543 111% => OK
No of words: 334.0 316.048096192 106% => OK
Chars per words: 6.40419161677 6.12580529183 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.40119760479 0.374742101984 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.308383233533 0.28420135186 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.200598802395 0.203846283523 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.140718562874 0.137316102897 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96231121725 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.037074148 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640718562874 0.56093040696 114% => OK
Word variations: 78.727906986 60.7387585426 130% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.875 20.7743622355 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9372725613 49.517814964 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.6875 127.492653851 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 20.7743622355 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0625 0.814263465372 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38877755511 137% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 51.7133233533 49.1944974215 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.85393258427 1.69124875643 110% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222862586414 0.332605444948 67% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0981767467514 0.102741220458 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0646173784614 0.0668466124924 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.58172441753 0.534860350844 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.166880414603 0.148594505496 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940080142617 0.134430193775 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835329791617 0.0742795772207 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.225918360664 0.324371583561 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0591229435341 0.0638462369009 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164770951741 0.228012699653 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102684100525 0.058150111329 177% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.