Some people believe that government should spent more money on healthcare and education, and not on sports and entertainment resource.
Do you agree or disagree?
Spending money by government in right sectors for the development of a nation has always been a challenging decision. It is asserted by some people that it would be wastage of financial resources, if money is spent on entertainment resources, rather a significant amount of money should be spent to provide medical care and education facilities to people. I disagree with the notion and intend to discuss my views in the following paragraphs.
On the one hand, it is believed that education and health care is the basic necessity and plays a vital role in growth of a country. This is because education creates better career opportunities and good healthcare facilities make sure every citizen is fit and healthy. Hence, employed and fit individuals not only enjoy myriad benefits of life, but also contribute to nation`s development by paying taxes. However, entertainment and sports are also providing a lot of career paths to youngsters and as well as are necessary to break monotony of daily life to have fun, which is equally important.
To conclude, although education and medical care are important in terms of essential requirements for life, I believe importance of sports and entertainment industry can not be ignored as these sectors are also playing a key role for the development of people by providing employment opportunities, huge contribution to nation`s economy and making people`s life cheerful.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22349570201 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15571007664 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530085959885 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.9805730892 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.214285714 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9285714286 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18585399838 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052739914183 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517217137523 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115555674552 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619061936218 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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