Some people believe it is important to give gifts and presents to friends and family to show that we care for them. Others think that there are better ways to show affection to them. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.
It is an Irrefutable fact that there are several ways to show care and affection towards our near and dear ones. A mass proportion of public believes that giving gifts are the best way to show our love towards the people we care and others say that there are many other alternatives apart from gifts. This essay will discuss both perceptions and will give some examples to support.
One of the most prominent benefits of giving gifts is memories. Gifts can be always memorable and can be peculiar to the person who receives. For example, if the couple had an argument and realize that they are mentally separating, gifts are the best way show the care towards the other person. Moreover, gifts can make people closer, as it is shown in many cultures send-off and farewell gifts play an imperative role in making people closer even though countries separate them.
Undoubtedly, there are several other ways to show our interest, love, and care towards the other person. People always do not look for presents, they sometimes need quality time with their loved ones. For instance, what is a good thing that you can do for a mother whose son in foreign countries? Give her a smartphone to chat with her son, or, get him to his mother so that she will feel good. Sometimes a good chat and quality time is better than worthy gifts.
In conclusion, people show care and love towards others in several ways, some buy gifts and some have different approaches. According to me, gifts are good options but more than gifts there are numerous things that a person can do to make others happy and show their care and affection.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 125, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, so, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70526315789 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32175202628 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522807017544 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0960581298 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7857142857 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336478060227 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115254143787 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702520790061 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214152282112 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680296967633 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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