Some people believe that no one should be allowed to continue working after the age of 65.However,others say there should not be a limitation on age and anyone should be allowed to work regardless of age .Discuss both the views and give your own opinion a

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Some people believe that no one should be allowed to continue working after the age of 65.However,others say there should not be a limitation on age and anyone should be allowed to work regardless of age .Discuss both the views and give your own opinion and include relevant example.

Few minds are of the opinion that not a single individual should work persistently after 65.on the contrary,some people are inclined towards a view that no one should get retired reluctantly and need to carry on with their workaholic attitude. My perception says that age restrictions are essential for both the person as well as for the workplace.Hence,according to me an honourable retirement after 65 is must.

Retirement itself defines a meaning,such as,to lead a life with ambience and socialism.Not only this but also at some stage organisation need young mind to persue further with an innovative ideas.For instance,any educational institute will opt for young and enthusiastic one who can use smart classes as well as educational softwares to run teaching methods smoothly,which an older teacher can't adopt.So,in a way,both the older person and organisation can get satisfaction socially as well as professionally.

Although,numerous people argue that there should not be age bar to work.To illustrates,if someone wants to go ahead with his job till 80 or above than he can.Certainly,he can keep himself woven around the area of his interest regardless of feeling nostalgic and knitted with unsocial ideas.Else,it enhances the creativity of a person in a credible and reliable way.

It seems to me that,it is admirable to perform a job persistently even after crossing 65 but to enjoy life at fullest as well as to impact career opportunities to fresh minds retirement at the age of 65 is essential.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'as for', 'as to', 'for instance', 'such as', 'as well as']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.197802197802 0.247107183377 80% => OK
Verbs: 0.14652014652 0.155533422707 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0879120879121 0.0946595960268 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0879120879121 0.0501214627716 175% => OK
Pronouns: 0.047619047619 0.0437548338989 109% => OK
Prepositions: 0.135531135531 0.122226691241 111% => OK
Participles: 0.021978021978 0.0403226058552 55% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.57412219009 2.80594681477 127% => OK
Infinitives: 0.043956043956 0.0326793684256 135% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0915750915751 0.0861772015684 106% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.029304029304 0.021408717616 137% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00732600732601 0.011925033212 61% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1621.0 1933.35771543 84% => OK
No of words: 242.0 316.048096192 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.69834710744 6.12580529183 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20517956788 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.338842975207 0.374742101984 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.280991735537 0.28420135186 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.214876033058 0.203846283523 105% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.169421487603 0.137316102897 123% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.57412219009 2.80594681477 127% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.037074148 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628099173554 0.56093040696 112% => OK
Word variations: 67.4916412533 60.7387585426 111% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0891783567 31% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 48.4 20.7743622355 233% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 115.6328673 49.517814964 234% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 324.2 127.492653851 254% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.4 20.7743622355 233% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.4 0.814263465372 295% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 3.99599198397 776% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 76.4991735537 49.1944974215 156% => OK
Elegance: 1.25974025974 1.69124875643 74% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355967814968 0.332605444948 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.18759284282 0.102741220458 183% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.048570803018 0.0668466124924 73% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.88086630985 0.534860350844 165% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.148991250095 0.148594505496 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.212292189231 0.134430193775 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860146966465 0.0742795772207 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.19626307322 0.324371583561 61% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0243594709674 0.0638462369009 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229689109145 0.228012699653 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918964752526 0.058150111329 158% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 10.4468937876 48% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.