Some people believe that scientists are controlling the world, others, however, others believe that politicians are controlling the world, discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, many people are thinking that the power of controlling the world is in the hands of scientists and few other masses opine that it is in the hands of the politicians. However, I think both the arguments are partially correct according to my knowledge and I will discuss it in brief in the following passage before giving my opinion.
On the one hand, scientists are the one who have the capability to introduce different medications and invent new technologies. In recent days, due to their hard work the technology has developed human life to an exponential rate. For example, with the help of their knowledge many dangerous diseases are being treated with new invent of treatments which is not done in the ancient days. At the same time, there are some drawbacks where their intelligence is being used for negative activities. In my opinion, the society is gaining numerous benefits with the great minds of scientists which means that it is helping the nation but not taking the control.
On the other hand, politicians always try to control the world with the power they have in the society. Indeed, they utilise their authority to implement different social activities and also to help the inhabitants in solving their problems. For example, to take some remedial steps regarding the implementations of society, it totally depends on the acceptance of politicians. Accordingly, we can say that politicians can take the control of the world into their hands.
After having considered all the above discussed points, we can finally draw a conclusion that the scientists always make use of their talent in innovating new methodologies in order to improve the society and people's health. Where the politicians have the control of the world in their hands, as it comes to them with the authority.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, finally, however, if, regarding, so, for example, i think, in brief, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03986710963 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82251675108 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53488372093 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2184365749 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.692307692 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241419687509 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886935140534 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850617488823 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156892549588 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651920816229 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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