Some people believe that sport has an important role in society. Others, however, feel that it is nothing more than a leisure activity for some people.
It is thought by some people that sport is essential part of people’ lives and it is very important. Another group of people claim that importance of sport is overrated and it is no more than possible way of free time’ spending. I strongly believe that sport is indispensable activity which allows to keep ourselves fit and alive.
Long time ago, physical training, as a discipline, was included in most schools and universities’ curriculum among the world. People of medicine think that we should develop ourselves in both ways: mentally and physically. Sport is one of the main needs of our body and we should spend at least one hour a day for any sport activity. It doesn’t matter which type of sport you prefer, football, swimming or running, it is doesn’t matter. The main reason is to put your muscles and aspiration system under temporary stress. It will help you to emit a daily portion of adrenaline and finally, helps you to keep in fit.
The second reason is that sport activities help people to avoid depression. Physiologists say that during sport activity body produces huge amount of endorphin. Endorphin is a hormone which responsible for our happiness. Thus, statistic data approved that sportsmen are more likely to be in high spirit of mood. To give a clear example, a famous Ukrainian politician, Vitaliy Klitchko was a professional boxer before he started his career as a politician. He says that despite he is not a boxer anymore, he is still spending more than one hour in the gym or in the swimming pool. These sport activities help him to clear his mind and refresh his thoughts.
The lackadaisical people who usually can’t find time for sport may have a variety of health problems, such as: obesity, hypertension, cardiovascular diseases. For example, two weeks ago I watched Ukrainian TV program about one of Kyiv inhabitant who acclaimed that sport was useless waste of time. He is a workaholic and spends most part of the day sitting in front of the screen. As a result, his eyesight has significantly decreased and weight has risen. Now, he wastes much money for medicaments and feels sorry for the way of life he used to live.
In conclusion, for our own sake we can’t rule out sport activities from our live. People who think opposite may have more problems with health in the future. So sport is our choice.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'keeping'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: keeping
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Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'still', 'thus', 'at least', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.26582278481 0.247107183377 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.149789029536 0.155533422707 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.084388185654 0.0946595960268 89% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0295358649789 0.0501214627716 59% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0717299578059 0.0437548338989 164% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.126582278481 0.122226691241 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0168776371308 0.0403226058552 42% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.86817093485 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0189873417722 0.0326793684256 58% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0611814345992 0.0861772015684 71% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0147679324895 0.021408717616 69% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0126582278481 0.011925033212 106% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2381.0 1933.35771543 123% => OK
No of words: 405.0 316.048096192 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.87901234568 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.20517956788 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.320987654321 0.374742101984 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.249382716049 0.28420135186 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.187654320988 0.203846283523 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.130864197531 0.137316102897 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86817093485 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.037074148 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56049382716 0.56093040696 100% => OK
Word variations: 65.2194141709 60.7387585426 107% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0891783567 149% => OK
Sentence length: 16.875 20.7743622355 81% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4214762357 49.517814964 59% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2083333333 127.492653851 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.7743622355 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.814263465372 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 41.8132716049 49.1944974215 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.63025210084 1.69124875643 96% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283482081846 0.332605444948 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0713677896774 0.102741220458 69% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0728699090047 0.0668466124924 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.456523753268 0.534860350844 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.135719852789 0.148594505496 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965928128811 0.134430193775 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745242231696 0.0742795772207 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.296438788497 0.324371583561 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0832105369139 0.0638462369009 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189647812585 0.228012699653 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859763770614 0.058150111329 148% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.41683366733 234% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 1.9629258517 306% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 10.4468937876 172% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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