Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views.
Education is a methods helping people to get knowledge. Young people graduating from high school often wonder that if they should study further or not. Many people believe that reaching to study at University or college is a best way to guarantee a successful career while others believe that going to work right after high school is a best option.
On one hand, working straight after high school bring some advantages for students. Firstly, it allows students to earn money as soon as possible. For example, to get a job, students can become a waiter, waitress in a restaurant or work super market store. As a result, they can live indepedently without parents’ finace support. It leads students to become mature to decide how they want to live in the world. An other good point is that, a person who choose to getting a job right away high school instead of continuing higher education is a growth much in their career. This will help students to gain a great amount of real experiences and skills in their field.
On the other hand, there are many factors why people tend to choose university or college after high school. First of all, graduating students from University or college always get higher salary than other do not have a degree. For example, a person having an engineer of mechanic degree will have a highly paid money in comparison with a labor worker. Furthermore , University or college prepares young people to gain profound knowledge to meet a high level qualifications to achieve a successful career. Young people will get a theory as well as practical training deeply in their field before getting a degree which allows students to reach a high position in the job market now adays.
In conclusion, both pursuing higher education and obtaining a job after high school have their own advantages and young people depend on their ability might choose which way is the best option for themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87804878049 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57991156461 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524390243902 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1072120172 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328370728762 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103361840588 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115489035621 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215353339876 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122918383648 0.056905535591 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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