Some people believe that technology caused some gap between the two generations. To what extend do you agree?
Nowadays, we live in a world in which technology dominated all aspects of human's lives and it surprised people. Among these people the younger generation is bound to pick up the information technology and use it in their daily routines while the older generation can't utilize it in their life and this will lead to a polarized society with serious problems such as lack of mutual intelligibility and different attitudes toward life.
The most important problem that affects the society is scarcity of mutual understanding between the two generations. The young generation is eagerly interested in learning information technology and using it in different aspects of their life since they found technology a useful tool that helped them fulfilling their daily tasks much easier. For example they can transfer money through internet without any need for commuting to bank which is time consuming. On the other hand, the old generation can't cope with imminent developments in technology and these developments make them bewildered.
Another significant problem which has effect on young and old generation is their different attitudes of life. While technology is developing in the modern life, the elder members of the society insist on pursuing the previous life style and they can't imagine following the new facilities that technology brings about for them. However, the young people are attracted by the modern life style and acquire all the necessary information to make benefits of technology.
To sums up, technology brings lots of benefits for people and all individuals should try to keep pace of technology to prevent problems between the two generations. Government authorities should tackle this problem by providing some classes in which elder members of the society can learn about new features of modern life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 264, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ily routines while the older generation cant utilize it in their life and this will ...
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Line 3, column 303, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to fulfil', 'to fulfill' or 'fulfil', 'fulfill'.
Suggestion: to fulfil; to fulfill; fulfil; fulfill
...chnology a useful tool that helped them fulfilling their daily tasks much easier. For exam...
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Line 3, column 500, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
.... On the other hand, the old generation cant cope with imminent developments in tech...
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Line 5, column 248, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...rsuing the previous life style and they cant imagine following the new facilities th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34256055363 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82842712475 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519031141869 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.4416421764 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.363636364 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2727272727 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128021746702 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547555165328 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526113204711 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898737190576 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528056512568 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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